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  1. GreenMan
    June 19, 2011 11:49:10 PM
    GreenMan
    Hey Blair I saw that you got on and missed ya, how is this crazy thing called life treating you?
  2. GreenMan
    December 1, 2010 02:38:19 AM
    GreenMan
    Must reallly be in the mood to write poetry it would seem i have produced one more
  3. GreenMan
    November 30, 2010 10:27:23 AM
    GreenMan
    What do you mean?
  4. Blair_Willow
    November 30, 2010 03:42:02 AM
    Blair_Willow
    Hmmm. Really thoughtful. I never thought of someone giving advice like that.
  5. GreenMan
    November 30, 2010 01:59:48 AM
    GreenMan
    I got a new peom up enjoy, love to hear your feed back as ussual
  6. GreenMan
    November 24, 2010 11:49:44 AM
    GreenMan
    Yeah it certainly is, still haven't fullying forgiven myself for what I did, in a great sense I'm at the point that second to last paragraph says
  7. Blair_Willow
    November 24, 2010 11:11:44 AM
    Blair_Willow
    Well, that's good. =]
  8. GreenMan
    November 24, 2010 09:07:19 AM
    GreenMan
    Fortunally I've been forgiven and I'm already starting to repair the damage I caused
  9. Blair_Willow
    November 24, 2010 02:00:10 AM
    Blair_Willow
    Ohhh. =[ Sadness.
  10. GreenMan
    November 23, 2010 08:39:42 PM
    GreenMan
    Made a stupid mistake, ended up hurting one of my friends that I didnt' want to hurt
  11. Blair_Willow
    November 23, 2010 08:31:36 PM
    Blair_Willow
    But what did you do that's so bad?
  12. GreenMan
    November 23, 2010 08:16:28 PM
    GreenMan
    Interesting that it came out the way, it wasn't the way i thought i wrote it I wrote it as Can i forgive myself for what I have done?
  13. Blair_Willow
    November 23, 2010 08:12:30 PM
    Blair_Willow
    Because the whole time, you're wondering "What could have been so bad to be unable to forgive yourself?"
  14. GreenMan
    November 23, 2010 08:11:34 PM
    GreenMan
    Why do you discribe it as that?
  15. Blair_Willow
    November 23, 2010 08:06:38 PM
    Blair_Willow
    I like. =] It's deep and mysterious.
  16. GreenMan
    November 23, 2010 11:02:23 AM
    GreenMan
    Got anouther Poem put up, would like to hear what you think about it and why.
  17. GreenMan
    November 21, 2010 11:05:11 PM
    GreenMan
    Glad you liked it, I was unsure of how it turned out
  18. Blair_Willow
    November 21, 2010 10:53:53 PM
    Blair_Willow
    Aww. =] I really like it. =]
  19. GreenMan
    November 21, 2010 07:07:55 PM
    GreenMan
    Ok I tried my hand at a more freestyle poem hope to hear what you think of it
  20. GreenMan
    November 20, 2010 02:54:49 AM
    GreenMan
    I wouldn't discribe my mind as poetic there are a few things that fall way before that
  21. Blair_Willow
    November 20, 2010 01:52:22 AM
    Blair_Willow
    Because all it takes to write good freestyle poetry is a poetic mind. =]
  22. GreenMan
    November 19, 2010 02:48:42 PM
    GreenMan
    How do you figure that?
  23. Blair_Willow
    November 19, 2010 02:24:23 PM
    Blair_Willow
    Well, I'd imagine you'd probably be good at it. (:
  24. GreenMan
    November 19, 2010 01:57:27 PM
    GreenMan
    Ah ok so you can really relate to it well, both Silent friend and You and me are actually based on the relationship that i have with two diffrrent people.
    Might have to try my hand at freestyling then just to see if I like it or can do to much with it
  25. Blair_Willow
    November 19, 2010 01:44:13 PM
    Blair_Willow
    I've been on both sides of it.
    Well, freestyle isn't as hard as rhyming.
    Like...
    You just post sentences pretty much.
    Like you're writing a paragraph, but type it in poetry form.
  26. GreenMan
    November 18, 2010 12:14:15 PM
    GreenMan
    No I haven't tried my hand at freestyle I start with a single
    Line and build up from there, not really sure how I would do freestyle though I would like to learn abou it and see what I can come up with. When you said you could relate to the poem You and Me which side of it are you on?
  27. Blair_Willow
    November 18, 2010 11:50:51 AM
    Blair_Willow
    You and Me I really liked. I'm in that situation a lot with my friends, so I can relate.
    Silent Friend is really nice too. =]

    Have you ever considered using poetry that doesn't follow a Rhyme Scheme, though?
    That's the only type of poetry I do. Freestyle, that is.
  28. GreenMan
    November 16, 2010 10:43:47 AM
    GreenMan
    I uploaded two more Poems that I did, would like to hear your feedback on both of them
  29. GreenMan
    November 16, 2010 07:47:45 AM
    GreenMan
    Yeah when it comes to poems them being a bit charged is good, I mean I can remember how I was feeling at the point I wrote it, that I find crazy
  30. Blair_Willow
    November 16, 2010 03:24:51 AM
    Blair_Willow
    They're full of personal emotions.
    I think that's a great thing with poetry.
  31. GreenMan
    November 14, 2010 03:22:04 PM
    GreenMan
    Why do you lke them?
    I'm a bit courious to what makes the appealing to you?
  32. Blair_Willow
    November 14, 2010 03:13:52 PM
    Blair_Willow
    Well, like I said, they're really goo d(:
  33. GreenMan
    November 12, 2010 01:57:46 PM
    GreenMan
    Thanks I do appreciate it, like i said before all three came from a time I was trying to figure out my emotoins
  34. Blair_Willow
    November 12, 2010 01:56:26 PM
    Blair_Willow
    Your poems are really good (:
    Rapids in the Heart was my favorite (:
  35. GreenMan
    November 11, 2010 07:52:29 PM
    GreenMan
    I know that you asked me to inform you when I finally got my peoms up, they are under my artwork thread hope you enjoy them

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