GuildmasterWigglytuff

Thanks, I'ma make you a better one when I get the time, though.

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/9898/gmsig.png

Instead of doing the darker colors on the outside, put them on the inside. That's why I suggested the black outline, since the lightest color would be there and may fade away.

It starts tomorrow, lasting all month. :3 *sees your current activity* You found it!

My sprite contest is up. Would you like to be the 3rd judge?

Never, and I mean it, NEVER leave me with something this big again. Your eyes are going to pop out when you see the amount of text...

Pfff... this ain't nothing I can't handle. You should see me in school, when I'm bored...

I read over it and you say "Dan said" a lot. Since you only play that character, people will know that you're character is talking. You should only mention vocal levels when your character is emotional, like sad or surprised. The story did start off a little boring, but I like where it's going.

Too busy to read it. And I was tired after an 8-hour shift at work. D:

I noticed. :3